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What powerful and evocative poetry! Kathleen Ma's work here is genuinely extraordinary – the way she weaves cosmic time scales with intensely personal moments creates something truly memorable.

The image of the gecko trapped in amber for 54 million years is haunting and brilliant. It works on so many levels – as a metaphor for feeling frozen in time, for the disconnect between our inner experience and external perception, and for the vast indifference of geological time to human concerns. That line "Ask the hollow of the tree where it came from, what it saw" – it's perfect. It captures how we're all carrying these ancient, incomprehensible histories within us.

I love how Ma juxtaposes that ancient gecko with the immediate, almost mundane image of sweating "like my pig" and the Kellogg factory in Battle Creek. There's something profound in placing deep time alongside American consumer culture. The gecko has been suspended for 54 million years, and we're worried about gas prices at two ninety-five.

"Sonnet for Desert" is equally striking. The cow named Desert grazing in 1953, destined to be "reborn as the lake's surface" – Ma has this incredible ability to collapse time and transformation into single, crystalline moments.

These poems understand something essential about perspective and scale. Brilliant work.

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